Posted in Backstory, Books, Writing

When a Fictional Character Starts to Feel Real

One of the questions that fascinated me while writing my soon-to-be-released novel, A Necessary Fiction, was this: what happens when a fictional character starts to feel more real than the person who created her?

Novelists have wrestled with versions of this question for centuries. We spend months or years (more like weeks for me, but who’s counting?) inventing people who don’t exist, only to find ourselves talking about them as though they do. Even as I write that statement, I realize that for me, they do exist, just not in the reality you and I live in day to day. Fictional characters become familiar companions, occupying space in our imaginations alongside people we know in real life. But these days, it seems to me, the line between fiction and reality is becoming increasingly difficult to define.

Social media has given all of us the ability to create versions of ourselves. Most of us don’t think of these versions as fictional, yet they are inevitably selective. We choose which photographs to post, which stories to tell, which opinions to share, and which parts of our lives remain hidden. Over time, the person who exists online can begin to take on an identity distinct from the person sitting behind the keyboard. This idea became central to A Necessary Fiction.

One of the novel’s characters creates an online persona that gradually attracts attention, followers, and influence. What begins as an experiment becomes something more complicated. The persona develops its own audience, expectations, and momentum. People react to it as though it were entirely real. In some respects, it becomes real. It influences decisions. It shapes relationships. It changes events in the physical world. The character who created it discovers something unsettling: once a story acquires an audience, it no longer belongs entirely to its author.

Writers understand this phenomenon well. Some might say that every book becomes a collaboration between author and reader. Still, in my view, before that can happen, it must be a collaboration between the writer and her characters. Readers bring their own experiences, assumptions, and interpretations, but so do characters. Writers tell their story, and then the characters further evolve in the minds of those who encounter them. Meanings that the author never intended begin to emerge

Online identities work in much the same way. We create them, but we don’t completely control them. Other people participate in their construction. Expectations accumulate. Narratives form. Before long, maintaining the story can become as important as living the life behind it.

This tension lies at the heart of A Necessary Fiction. This book is a literary thriller that explores not only the stories we tell others but also the ones we tell ourselves. It asks whether truth is always as straightforward as we imagine and examines how narratives can protect us, deceive us, and sometimes take on a life of their own.

Perhaps that’s why the title resonates so strongly with me. A necessary fiction is more than a lie. It is a story we come to depend upon. It may begin as something invented, but over time, it becomes woven into our understanding of ourselves and the world around us.

The question is not whether we live among fictions. We all do. The more interesting question is this: how do we know when a fiction has become reality?

Posted in Nonfiction Writing, Writing, Writing craft

People Drive Stories: Tips for Creating Compelling Characters in Fiction and Narrative Nonfiction

Earlier this week, one of my regular viewers on my YouTube channel WRITE. FIX. REPEAT. asked me if I’d consider doing a video on creating compelling characters. As readers, we know that the people who populate the pages of novels, memoirs and other forms of narrative nonfiction are the life and breath of the story. As writers, even if a story’s plot idea inspires us, we know that it will be the characters who will need to inhabit our imaginations and tell their stories. At least, that’s how it is for me.

Characters are crucial for engaging storytelling. And it doesn’t matter if you’re writing fiction or narrative nonfiction. People make your stories come alive.

You know this when you’re reading a novel, but it’s important to remember that there are characters (even if they’re real people, they’re still characters) in narrative nonfiction.

For example, a few years ago, my husband (who happens to be a medical doctor) wrote a book called Life is Terminal: A Doctor’s Common Sense Guide for Making it to the End.

Although this title makes it sound like it’s completely prescriptive nonfiction (which it primarily is), it also has a narrative component. Woven throughout the book is a series of connected stories about a family doctor from the beginning of his practice to the end, illustrating how the ideas and concepts in the book evolved. Creating a character, even in this kind of nonfiction, is key to connecting with readers.

After my viewer asked me about developing characters, my first thought was that I didn’t really create them. Rather, they talk to me and create the stories in my novels. But that’s not entirely fair. At some point, there are actual approaches writers take, either consciously or not, to make characters more engaging.

I have five tips to help you create dynamic, real people in the pages of your stories.

First, give characters depth and complexity. Characters, like real people, need multifaceted personalities. You probably already know this. So, how can you make this happen? Try to avoid stereotypes and clichés. Give your characters a mix of strengths, weaknesses, quirks, fears, and desires.

We can illustrate different sides of our characters’ personalities through their actions, dialogue, and inner thoughts. Consider their backstory and motivations; what drives them to act the way they do? Creating a character’s backstory is one of the ways to ferret out motivations. Try a writing exercise: write in first person from each character’s POV and let them tell their own backstory. Of course, this is for your eyes only! We all know it’s unnecessary (and not appropriate) to spill a character’s entire backstory for the reader.

I also think it’s important to craft characters who are relatable and human. Characters should jump off the page (or screen) and into the minds of the readers. Readers connect with characters they can empathize with. Writing teachers often talk about endowing characters with relatable traits. What exactly makes a character’s traits relatable? In the main, these are personality traits that the audience might share and thus understand. And this goes for demonstrating emotion as well. It’s important to show their vulnerabilities and struggles.

Even in extraordinary circumstances, let them react in ways that feel authentic and understandable. As the story progresses, so should the characters.

There’s always been a question about creating a visual reality for each character. How much should you describe? I believe we need to create a visual reality for our characters by incorporating memorable visuals and details, but we need to be mindful of overdoing this kind of description.

Use clear descriptions to bring your characters to life. Highlight distinctive physical attributes, mannerisms, and unique characteristics (but don’t think you need to describe every detail—leave some things to the readers’ imaginations).

But characters don’t connect with readers—or readers don’t connect with characters—unless those characters compellingly demonstrate their individual motivations and goals. Characters aren’t that interesting unless they have reasons for their actions to drive the plot forward. The main question you should be able to answer: What does your character want? What obstacles stand in their way? Their desires and conflicts should be integral to the storyline, creating tension and intrigue.

Finally, but very important, characters talk. We give our characters a voice by using dialogue to create authenticity. Dialogue is a powerful tool for revealing character traits and relationships. We need to pay attention to creating distinctive speech patterns, vocabulary, and tone. Dialogue should feel natural and serve to deepen characterization. Avoid exposition-heavy conversations (characters should not constantly talk about things just so you can convey information to the reader); instead, use dialogue to show relationships, conflicts, and emotions.

Remember that compelling characters are the heart of any great narrative—they drive the story forward and keep readers invested in the outcome. What are your best tips for creating characters?

Posted in Backstory, Books, Fiction Writing

Novel Backstory: The Seeds of Inspiration

Every time I read a novel, I’m intrigued about the source of the inspiration and how the story developed in the writer’s mind during the writing. My own process has evolved over the years to the point where I consider myself to be in the role of transcriptionist as my characters take over and force me to tell their story. I used to plan everything and try to tell my stories. That didn’t work for me.

My most recent book had an interesting genesis, and how the underlying premise evolved might be interesting for other writers – or even my readers. I know it’s interesting to me! I wrote about it on my style blog, and if you’re interested, surf away…