Posted in Backstory, Writing craft, Fiction Writing

More Than a Setting: When Place Becomes a Character

A setting is where a story happens. But what if it can be more than that? A place that becomes a character is something else entirely.

It has a personality. It exerts influence by shaping the people who inhabit it. It shapes what they take for granted and often becomes something they can never quite escape, even if they leave physically. It holds secrets, preserves memories, and often complicates the lives of people who call it home or just come from away and stay only a short time. But unlike a character a writer creates in a story, a place arrives with its own history.

As writers, we describe a coastline, a city street or a small town. We establish the weather, sketch the architecture and provide the geographical coordinates. But none of that necessarily brings a place to life. A place becomes a character only when it matters to the story.

Think of the landscapes in the fiction we remember. They are rarely interchangeable. If you removed the Yorkshire moors from Wuthering Heights, the Mississippi River from The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, or, my favourite, Manderley from Rebecca, you would change more than the scenery. The story’s emotional and moral universe would change dramatically.

Place undoubtedly influences behaviour. It establishes boundaries, creates opportunities and imposes limitations. It even shapes local humour and social conventions, becoming central to the stories people tell about themselves.

But through whose eyes does the story of “place” become true? An outsider may see an extraordinary landscape, and yet a lifelong resident might see it as the site of a childhood humiliation, a family feud or a harrowing drive to the nearest hospital. A tourist sees the picturesque bits. A local sees a leaking roof. Both are telling the truth, but neither possesses the whole truth. This tension is fertile ground for writers.

As a writer, I’ve noticed the challenge is resisting the urge to turn a place—my story’s setting—into a travel brochure. This challenge can be exceptionally charged when the setting has so much to offer to travellers. The most interesting settings, though, are not necessarily the most beautiful.

I thought about this while writing We Came From Away, my book, a finalist for the 2025 Leacock Medal for Literary Humour. Newfoundland is more than a geographical backdrop. Its character, culture and distinctive sense of humour are inseparable from the story’s world. The place shapes not only what happens, but how people understand it and talk about it afterward.

Every place has its own vocabulary, rhythms and silences. It has things people discuss freely and things they know better than to mention. It has myths about itself, some deserved, and others maintained largely out of habit. Rather than decorative details, they’re part of a story’s social architecture.

Perhaps the real test is this: when readers finish a book, do they remember only what happened to the characters, or do they feel they have been somewhere?

When a place becomes a character, readers don’t simply visit. They form a relationship. They may recognize it, miss it, argue with it or want to return. They may even discover that a place they thought they knew looks different through someone else’s eyes.

Posted in editing, punctuation, Writing craft

Ode to the “Em Dash”

I’m working on the second draft of my newest novel. I love working on second drafts almost as much as writing the first draft. (The less said about how much I love working on the subsequent ones, the better.) As I edit, I’m struck by a detail that should never have become a problem. It is a punctuation mark.

I’m not sure when I first discovered that I had a favourite punctuation mark. However, it was a revelation when em dashes began appearing in my writing decades ago, if I recall correctly.

Most people aren’t aware, but the em dash first appeared in the fifteenth century as a mark indicating the width of the letter “M.” It was, in fact, not even an invention created by grammarians to assist us in expressing our precise meaning, as most punctuation does. Rather, a printer gave us this handy little mark, which lets us replace parentheses, commas and colons. In my view, it also gives the sentence a different feel and, therefore, a different meaning.

I even did a YouTube video on this handy, well-loved little mark back in 2022 (when I still did that kind of thing), giving tips on my personal favourite punctuation marks. FYI, I’ve added it at the bottom in case you’re into these things.

So, you can imagine my horror at discovering that the em dash is now one of the ways editors and readers think they can spot writing created by artificial intelligence. How utterly simplistic. This horrific discovery then sent me on a mad chase to find my em dashes in my second drafts. I examine where I have used them and try to figure out whether parentheses or commas would be better. In almost every case, they would not. So, I’ve succumbed, like so many other writers these days, to incorporating the dreaded sentence fragment. Probably even worse. If you get my meaning.

Then, common sense dawns. I step back and realize that if anyone thinks any piece of writing wasn’t created by a human just because there are em dashes, then I believe we have a serious literacy problem. If, on the other hand, you love a story that also might have the odd em dash, used correctly, effectively and by design, then read it and love it.

I am not apologizing for my em dashes. I love them. 

Posted in Backstory, Books, Writing

When a Fictional Character Starts to Feel Real

One of the questions that fascinated me while writing my soon-to-be-released novel, A Necessary Fiction, was this: what happens when a fictional character starts to feel more real than the person who created her?

Novelists have wrestled with versions of this question for centuries. We spend months or years (more like weeks for me, but who’s counting?) inventing people who don’t exist, only to find ourselves talking about them as though they do. Even as I write that statement, I realize that for me, they do exist, just not in the reality you and I live in day to day. Fictional characters become familiar companions, occupying space in our imaginations alongside people we know in real life. But these days, it seems to me, the line between fiction and reality is becoming increasingly difficult to define.

Social media has given all of us the ability to create versions of ourselves. Most of us don’t think of these versions as fictional, yet they are inevitably selective. We choose which photographs to post, which stories to tell, which opinions to share, and which parts of our lives remain hidden. Over time, the person who exists online can begin to take on an identity distinct from the person sitting behind the keyboard. This idea became central to A Necessary Fiction.

One of the novel’s characters creates an online persona that gradually attracts attention, followers, and influence. What begins as an experiment becomes something more complicated. The persona develops its own audience, expectations, and momentum. People react to it as though it were entirely real. In some respects, it becomes real. It influences decisions. It shapes relationships. It changes events in the physical world. The character who created it discovers something unsettling: once a story acquires an audience, it no longer belongs entirely to its author.

Writers understand this phenomenon well. Some might say that every book becomes a collaboration between author and reader. Still, in my view, before that can happen, it must be a collaboration between the writer and her characters. Readers bring their own experiences, assumptions, and interpretations, but so do characters. Writers tell their story, and then the characters further evolve in the minds of those who encounter them. Meanings that the author never intended begin to emerge

Online identities work in much the same way. We create them, but we don’t completely control them. Other people participate in their construction. Expectations accumulate. Narratives form. Before long, maintaining the story can become as important as living the life behind it.

This tension lies at the heart of A Necessary Fiction. This book is a literary thriller that explores not only the stories we tell others but also the ones we tell ourselves. It asks whether truth is always as straightforward as we imagine and examines how narratives can protect us, deceive us, and sometimes take on a life of their own.

Perhaps that’s why the title resonates so strongly with me. A necessary fiction is more than a lie. It is a story we come to depend upon. It may begin as something invented, but over time, it becomes woven into our understanding of ourselves and the world around us.

The question is not whether we live among fictions. We all do. The more interesting question is this: how do we know when a fiction has become reality?