Posted in Backstory, Writing craft, Fiction Writing

More Than a Setting: When Place Becomes a Character

A setting is where a story happens. But what if it can be more than that? A place that becomes a character is something else entirely.

It has a personality. It exerts influence by shaping the people who inhabit it. It shapes what they take for granted and often becomes something they can never quite escape, even if they leave physically. It holds secrets, preserves memories, and often complicates the lives of people who call it home or just come from away and stay only a short time. But unlike a character a writer creates in a story, a place arrives with its own history.

As writers, we describe a coastline, a city street or a small town. We establish the weather, sketch the architecture and provide the geographical coordinates. But none of that necessarily brings a place to life. A place becomes a character only when it matters to the story.

Think of the landscapes in the fiction we remember. They are rarely interchangeable. If you removed the Yorkshire moors from Wuthering Heights, the Mississippi River from The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, or, my favourite, Manderley from Rebecca, you would change more than the scenery. The story’s emotional and moral universe would change dramatically.

Place undoubtedly influences behaviour. It establishes boundaries, creates opportunities and imposes limitations. It even shapes local humour and social conventions, becoming central to the stories people tell about themselves.

But through whose eyes does the story of “place” become true? An outsider may see an extraordinary landscape, and yet a lifelong resident might see it as the site of a childhood humiliation, a family feud or a harrowing drive to the nearest hospital. A tourist sees the picturesque bits. A local sees a leaking roof. Both are telling the truth, but neither possesses the whole truth. This tension is fertile ground for writers.

As a writer, I’ve noticed the challenge is resisting the urge to turn a place—my story’s setting—into a travel brochure. This challenge can be exceptionally charged when the setting has so much to offer to travellers. The most interesting settings, though, are not necessarily the most beautiful.

I thought about this while writing We Came From Away, my book, a finalist for the 2025 Leacock Medal for Literary Humour. Newfoundland is more than a geographical backdrop. Its character, culture and distinctive sense of humour are inseparable from the story’s world. The place shapes not only what happens, but how people understand it and talk about it afterward.

Every place has its own vocabulary, rhythms and silences. It has things people discuss freely and things they know better than to mention. It has myths about itself, some deserved, and others maintained largely out of habit. Rather than decorative details, they’re part of a story’s social architecture.

Perhaps the real test is this: when readers finish a book, do they remember only what happened to the characters, or do they feel they have been somewhere?

When a place becomes a character, readers don’t simply visit. They form a relationship. They may recognize it, miss it, argue with it or want to return. They may even discover that a place they thought they knew looks different through someone else’s eyes.

Posted in editing, punctuation, Writing craft

Ode to the “Em Dash”

I’m working on the second draft of my newest novel. I love working on second drafts almost as much as writing the first draft. (The less said about how much I love working on the subsequent ones, the better.) As I edit, I’m struck by a detail that should never have become a problem. It is a punctuation mark.

I’m not sure when I first discovered that I had a favourite punctuation mark. However, it was a revelation when em dashes began appearing in my writing decades ago, if I recall correctly.

Most people aren’t aware, but the em dash first appeared in the fifteenth century as a mark indicating the width of the letter “M.” It was, in fact, not even an invention created by grammarians to assist us in expressing our precise meaning, as most punctuation does. Rather, a printer gave us this handy little mark, which lets us replace parentheses, commas and colons. In my view, it also gives the sentence a different feel and, therefore, a different meaning.

I even did a YouTube video on this handy, well-loved little mark back in 2022 (when I still did that kind of thing), giving tips on my personal favourite punctuation marks. FYI, I’ve added it at the bottom in case you’re into these things.

So, you can imagine my horror at discovering that the em dash is now one of the ways editors and readers think they can spot writing created by artificial intelligence. How utterly simplistic. This horrific discovery then sent me on a mad chase to find my em dashes in my second drafts. I examine where I have used them and try to figure out whether parentheses or commas would be better. In almost every case, they would not. So, I’ve succumbed, like so many other writers these days, to incorporating the dreaded sentence fragment. Probably even worse. If you get my meaning.

Then, common sense dawns. I step back and realize that if anyone thinks any piece of writing wasn’t created by a human just because there are em dashes, then I believe we have a serious literacy problem. If, on the other hand, you love a story that also might have the odd em dash, used correctly, effectively and by design, then read it and love it.

I am not apologizing for my em dashes. I love them. 

Posted in Book promotion, Writing, Writing books

What I’ve Learned About Writing Humour

I had a surreal experience recently. My book, We Came From Away, was a 2025 finalist for one of the most coveted literary awards in Canada. It’s the Stephen Leacock Award for Literary Humour. If you don’t know who Leacock was, then you probably should.

He was only the best-known humourist in the world between 1915 and 1925.

British by birth, Leacock settled in Canada, where he first worked as a professor of economics at McGill University in Montreal and later relocated to a small town two hours north of Toronto. And it was to this town, Orillia (also the hometown of another Canadian great, Gordon Lightfoot, BTW), that he settled, and it was there that the Leacock Medal originated three years after he died in 1944.

So, as a finalist, I spent the weekend hobnobbing with some of Canada’s finest humorists: Wayne Johnston, Cathal Kelly, Terry Fallis. They were all there because they are all past winners. Anyway, at one point in the weekend, when someone said that we write humour because we’re all funny people, I almost swallowed my tongue. I am not funny. Not funny at all.

Here we are…the three finalists, cutting a cake that features the covers of all three short-listed books. (I think this photo is courtesy of Leacock Associates, https://tinyurl.com/2k58vj2n, but there are so many similar ones…)

And most of my writing isn’t funny—unless it is. Clearly, since my book was chosen as one of the three best humour books of the year, I must have done something right. The truth is that I don’t set out to write humour. Humour creeps in through my characters and their experiences. So, I thought I’d share some tips about injecting humour into your writing.

Okay, maybe I’m a bit funny when required to do a dreaded book signing. (photo credit: CG Production Company, via https://tinyurl.com/2k58vj2n)

Of course, there is nothing funny about much of what we write these days. If you’re an unfunny writer, you probably wonder why you’d even think about such a ludicrous idea. Well, there may be reasons you haven’t even thought about. I never set out to write humour, either.

I first thought about why one might even consider injecting humour into one’s writing. Here are some reasons.

  • Humour can make your writing more engaging.
  • Humour can help you build rapport with your readers.
  • Humour can sometimes provide contrast to the darker moments, heightening emotional impact.
  • Humour sharpens insight.
  • It can also help to light your own mood.

So, what have I learned about writing humour?

First, I learned that humour comes best when the writer first finds the truth and then exaggerates it.

Much of the best humour comes from seeing everyday truths in a sharper, exaggerated light. Take something relatable and then push it a little further into the absurd, the awkward, or the ironic.

I also learned that it’s essential to keep an eye on your audience’s sense of humour.

Not everything is funny to everyone, and in these days where so many people choose to take offence at just about anything, you sometimes have to tread carefully. I have an ongoing funny focus on vegans in this book—one of the characters is a vegan and she bears the brunt of the other character’s slightly off-kilter opinions on veganism and its dubious place in their lives. Sorry, not sorry if anyone is offended. It’s humour. 

I also know this to be true: less is funnier. There is no need to over-explain the joke or pile on too many punchlines at once. I learned to trust my readers to “get it.” Often, one well-placed witty line or ironic observation is far funnier than paragraphs trying too hard.

Characters are the foundation of humour in any scene. Humour really shines when it grows organically out of your characters’ personalities or flaws. A character’s inappropriate observations ( my characters are the queens of the inappropriate). Even their deadpan reactions to events can be hilarious—and believable. It’s not about making the scene funny. It’s about following your character’s actions and reactions.

Overall, as I was writing We Came From Away and its sequel Meet Me in Miami, I realized that there’s a difference between writing comedy and writing humour. Comedy writers are going for the gags. Going for the laughs. Humour writers know that there is humour in the mundane. It’s all about how you see it.

Not all my writing is funny, and that’s great for my humour writing because when the characters and situations are funny, it just happens.

Now, when I’m not writing stories that make people laugh, I’m writing mysteries and thrillers. A genre change, you say? Why, yes. Why not?