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Creating a Story Setting that Doubles as a Character

Have you ever experienced a book whose setting itself was a living, breathing part of the story? That the setting is so alive and so real in your mind that the story couldn’t be told without it? Of course, you have. That’s what happens when your setting becomes a character, and that’s when your story becomes even more compelling.

Further, this is a technique not only for fiction writers. Consider the setting in true-crime nonfiction, or memoir, or biography. Even real places with real people can come alive and be another essential character.

Two years ago, my novel “We Came From Away” debuted. Set on the island of Newfoundland, the story would be nothing without its setting. Readers told me they felt as if they were there—they could feel the place. When a reader feels the place—the setting—it has come alive. And the truth is that the story in “We Came From Away” would be nothing without the setting.

Here are some of the pieces of the setting for the novel from that trip I took to the island of Newfoundland a couple of years ago. These became part of the setting’s backstory.

When I was writing that book, I learned a lot about how a setting comes alive with personality and purpose. In this episode of WRITE. FIX. REPEAT. I’m sharing five tips I learned.

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Writing a Book Series: What No One Else Will Tell You

It seems that everywhere you look these days, writers are being told to write a series of books—often before they’ve even written the first one! As far as I’m concerned, this is the dumbest way to write a series or even a book. The thinking seems to be that if you can hook a reader on one book, that reader will buy another one that continues the story or theme.

And this can be either fiction or nonfiction. Bestselling writers like David Baldacci and Michael Connelly are the masters of the book series, so much so that readers lie in waiting for their favourite characters to reappear. But it’s not just for fiction.

If you’re a travel writer, for example, you might write a series of books on a variety of places. The same goes for a health or food writer. Regardless of the topic you’re searching for these days, you can find a series.

There is a lot of advice on writing a book series, and most of it is the same. Most of it starts with the admonition to plan out your series. I’m going to turn that advice on its head because my advice is 180 degrees in the opposite direction from the conventional wisdom. (Although, to tell you the truth, I’m not sure anyone who’s written that advice has ever really written a series).

Here’s what no one else will tell you: Do not, under any circumstances, think of your book as a series until you’ve written the last sentence of the last chapter and the book tells you there’s another one.

Now, I’m going to tell you why and what else you might consider.

What is a book series?

Let’s start by ensuring we’re all thinking about a book series in the same way.

First, a series is not just a number of books written by the same author. In fact, many bestselling series authors have penned several different series. David Baldacci has written something in the vicinity of ten distinct series.

There are also different kinds of series (even publishers can group books by various authors and call them a series―one of my nonfiction books is part of just such a publisher’s series), but I’m talking about a specific type of series.

The definition of a series we’ll use today is this…

“…a sequential group of books by the same author that share specific characteristics…”

My unconventional advice

First—and this is key—do not set out to write a series. No matter what anyone tells you, write one book and see how you feel about it at the end of the process. Could it be the beginning of a series? If it could, the book will tell you.

When I wrote The Year I Made 12 Dresses, I had absolutely no notion of writing a series. But Charlie Hudson, the main character, simply wouldn’t let go of me. She forced me to tell her mother’s secrets, and Kat’s Kosmic Blues was born―and even that wasn’t the last one. She just kept talking.

My second piece of advice is that each book should stand on its own outside the series. Not all readers will find your first book and then proceed sequentially through the series. So, you need to tell enough of the backstory but not too much.

For example, when I wrote book three of the “almost-but-not-quite-true stories,” a reader had to be able to become immersed in The Inscrutable Life of Frannie Phillips without having read Kat’s story. However, the reader also had to be able to think that he or she might like to go back and read the previous two books.

I also recommend that you keep meticulous notes on backstory—characters, places, events, etc.

If you’re writing a nonfiction series, keep a carefully crafted style guide. If it’s fiction, you need a notebook that contains the complete backstory of every character who might reappear. It also needs details on recurring settings, etc.

As you write the first book, let the process become organic. Let one book lead you into the next one. Each well-crafted paragraph in a book contains a transition into the next one. Each well-crafted chapter transitions into the next. It should be the same from one book to the next―even if you have to go back and rewrite the ending of the first book when the character tells you there’s another one that needs to be written.

Finally, think abt your readers. They always need something new, so keep the material fresh by introducing something new in each book,

When I wrote Kat’s Kosmic Blues, the main character was the through-line from one book to another, and the events were sequential. But in this book, although my use of point of view was the same as in the first one, this book came with a Spotify playlist―where each chapter was named for a song from the 60s and 70s, the years in which the book was primarily set.

Of course, there are different kinds of series: ones that have an overarching plot, ones where there is only one plot per book and the anthology kind where the individual books are only loosely tied together by a setting, perhaps. For me, that’s stretching the series definition, but it does exist.

I once saw it written that a series is the meal they keep coming back for. Maybe. But in my view, a series is at least as much a feast for the writer!

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Thinking of Writing a Memoir? Think Twice Before You Do

Let’s just get this out of the way: the world is overflowing with memoirs. Every bookstore, every online retailer, every garage sale is drowning in them. You can’t turn around without bumping into another “heartfelt” story about someone overcoming adversity or, heaven forbid, discovering themselves. Enough is enough. However…perhaps you do have a compelling story that you need to share with the world—not because you need to fix everyone else with a similar problem, and certainly not because you just need to vent—but because your story is entertaining, compelling and adds value to the vast sea of literature out there. Then, you should consider writing a memoir.

I had a fascinating slice of life in my past that seemed endlessly entertaining to everyone who knew about it. I was often peppered with questions. So, I decided to write a memoir about that interesting aspect of my life. In the process, I learned more than a thing or two. In this episode of WRITE. FIX. REPEAT. I’m sharing five tips that might help you with yours.

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