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10 Common Mistakes of Self-Published Writers

oopsOkay, we’ve all made mistakes. And I doubt that there’s a writer among us who has yet to experience a misstep in his or her writing career. Throughout my (long) writing and publishing history, I’ve made my share of doozies (To read about one of them see The dumbest publishing decision I ever made), but to broaden my observations even further, I’ve observed a long litany of mistakes among my fellow authors as well. Here are the ten I believe to be the most common.

  1. Publishing a first (or even second) draft. As a new writer, you might think that your writing is just fine the way you put it onto the page or computer screen. It isn’t. Believing in the infallibility of a first draft is the hallmark of an inexperienced writer. The more experienced you get, the better your writing gets. And the better your writing gets, the more you realize that the first draft (or even second) is not the draft you want ANYONE to read – not even your beta readers. Have a bit of respect for their time.
  2. Failing to take the time for writing practice – without publishing a single word of it. Just like figure skaters, pianists and dancers to name only a few, writers need lots of practice before any of their words should see the light of day. It’s a question of quality.
  3. Believing that basic building blocks of writing – grammar, spelling and syntax come immediately to mind – aren’t important. I’ve actually heard neophyte authors on online forums arrogantly suggest that readers don’t care about these things if the story is a good one. I beg to differ. Many care a lot and you should too. It is impossible to convey the right message/story if you and your readers are not using the language in the same way. Remember the book Eats Shoots and Leaves? If you don’t, you need to read it. Immediately.
  4. Failing to carefully copy-edit. Or even better, failing to hire a professional copy-editor to do it for you. New writers don’t seem to know the difference between a substantive edit (which gets you from draft one to two to three etc.) and a final copy-edit. Every book out there – even ones that are professionally copy-edited – can harbor typos and other errors that are missed at this stage in the publishing process. That doesn’t make it okay for you to publish a book that hasn’t been edited in this fine fashion.
  5. Designing your own book cover (without even a modicum of design experience or talent). If you do have graphic design experience, then I think you should go ahead and design your cover. In fact, you are probably the best one to do it since you know the book intimately. However, without this kind of background, you need to step away to avoid a book cover that makes it onto sites like Lousy Book Covers or in articles like Kindle Cover Disasters: the world’s worst ebook artwork . Readers do garner a lot of information about a book from its cover. Primarily they decide if they want to read it. Or not.
  6. Failing to do a final format check after conversion of a Word file to PDF for publication. I’ll admit it – I’m guilty of this one. Before I realized that PDF’s would read some of the background formatting that I could no longer see in the Word document, I blithely thought that once I had done a final review of the Word document, that was enough. Not so much. That PDF needs a careful final review before hitting the ‘publish’ button.mistakes
  7. Disregarding the importance of writing and carefully editing the book’s online description. Mother of God! How many times have I read online book descriptions with typos?! Sentence structure problems?! Grammatical errors?! Of course not to mention those ones that fail to provide even a modicum of persuasive copy.
  8. Continually tweeting “Buy my book, buy my book.” This is beyond annoying to those of us who would otherwise like to follow your contributions to Twitter. Once in a while it’s fine to promote your book, but don’t do it in every tweet. And don’t do it every single, blasted time you contribute to a LinkedIn Author discussion. This is beyond irritating. (For more on this rant of mine read When book promotion gets annoying.)
  9. Failing to understand that you need to connect to readers online – not a whole lot of other writers who are equally trying to sell their books. Unless your book is directed to writers (uh…hem…some of mine are) you’re barking up the wrong tree.
  10. Apologizing for being self-published. Can we all just stop it? If you write well and provide readers with a quality product that respects them, you don’t need to apologize for how it got into their hands. Readers who love your books don’t care.

I think that creating quality material in whatever genre, and providing it to readers with respect are the two most important parts of being a writer – regardless of who publishes your work.

Posted in Book marketing, Book promotion, Publishing

Book Promotion 101: Who will really read your book?

publishing word cloud“Everyone is not your customer.”  So says best-selling American author and speaker Seth Godin. I learned this lesson many  years ago when I proposed my first non-fiction book to a publisher.  In this post, I’d like to share with you a sample chapter from Who Will Read Your Book? The Unknown Writer’s Guide to the Realities of Writing & Publishing.

I  hope you’ll let me know if you find it useful.


Books don’t sell themselves.  This was probably the first reality of publishing that I learned.  This was swiftly followed by its corollary: Someone has to sell them…and that someone is largely the author.  This is a consideration that writers who wish to see their books read by adoring fans seem to have forgotten.

WWRYB CoverPotential readers will never have the joy of reading the books that they have never heard about.  We need to explore what book promotion really means in the industry overall and for individual authors.  For me personally, my own experiences also drive home the fact that it doesn’t matter whether you are traditionally published, or you take on the job yourself: you still have to learn how to promote your own work. And you have to know who will read it.

The presumption that I make when delving into the notion of book promotion is that you actually would like someone to buy and read your book – or at least read it.  I say this because as hard as it might be for some unknown writers to understand, it is not a foregone conclusion that all writers care about whether or not others will read their work.  (Of course, you might well suggest that they should then not publish – which implies “public” work – but we’ll not go there at this time).  For example, an academic, might publish something simply to have it on the public record knowing full well that the subject matter is discernible to a select few and there will be few readers.  Even if you aren’t doing this to generate income from the actual published work, you probably do want others to read it so that you can accomplish other objectives.

For example, you might write and self-publish a book because you want to share something with the hope of helping others, and you don’t much care if you make any money – it’s a labor of love.  Another reason for writing a book might be to promote your career and build your reputation as an expert in your field.  This is what career self-help gurus sometimes refer to as your electronic business card.  You write a short e-book utilizing your expertise; people download it for free, read it, like it and subsequently hire you to do whatever it is you do.

The bottom line is this: whether for love or money, if you want someone other than you and your immediate family to read this book, you have to promote it. People will not buy, download, read, think about or talk about your book if they do not know it exists.  It’s as simple as that. The problem is that many writers don’t see themselves as marketers – and for good reason.  They’re just not good at it.  It’s time to hone your skills. And that starts with a plan.

The book promotion plan

There are two approaches – strategies if you will – to promoting your book:  seat-of-the-pants-and-devil-may-care, or make-a-plan-and-implement-it.  That’s it.

With a quarter of a century in the corporate communication strategy game, I’m not interested in the seat-of-the-pants etc. approach to book promotion.  If you want others to read your book, you’ll have to find out who they are and figure out a way to make them take action by buying and reading your book.

There’s a theory about how people adopt new products and ideas.  It’s called the “diffusion-of-innovation” theory, and in a nutshell it suggests the following as a generally, non-linear explanation of how we move to buy that book:

new idea adoption

What this means is that people first have to become aware that the book exists.  Then something has to pique their interest.  The potential readers will then somehow evaluate the idea that they should read the book – perhaps by reading reviews or looking for recommendations from friends and networked acquaintances.  They then try it out: either by examining the inside of the book online, downloading a sample, or even buying a copy. The notion of ‘adoption’ would mean that a reader who adopts this product would tell others about it and then await, with baited breath, your next book.  A single, one-time purchase by someone who hates the book is not what you’re aiming for.

If we use this understanding of the general process that potential readers would go thorough, we can develop a framework to guide our book marketing.  That framework will have several planks that include the following:

  • Identifying and locating potential readers
  • Deciding what you want to accomplish with them
  • Developing the right messages for these potential readers
  • Targeting these potential readers by using media they embrace
  • Disseminating the messages to the readers
  • Measuring the success based on what you wanted to achieve.

We’ll examine each component in turn.

Identifying and locating potential readers

What do you know about the people who might be interested in your book?  Let’s begin by examining the potential reader for non-fiction.

If you did what I suggested in an earlier chapter and created that book proposal for a publisher or for yourself, you would have had to think about this before you even wrote the book.  If, for one second, you think that your book is for everyone, you need to know right now that you’re wrong. No book is for everyone.  That means that you’ll have to think carefully about what might be considered your book’s mission.

  • What is your book intended to accomplish?
  • How will it accomplish its goal?
  • Who is the goal intended to target?

Once you can state these things, you have your book’s mission statement so to speak, and you can begin to figure out more details about the potential readership of your book.

Your work of fiction can be dealt with similarly, although creating a mission statement for a work of fiction is probably a bit more esoteric.  You might not have a particular goal for the book other than entertaining readers with a good story – but I believe that this is a worthy one.  How it will do that is through great story-telling.  Who will read it and where you can find those potential readers will require just as much research as it does in finding readers for non-fiction.

Regardless of whether you are writing narrative or prescriptive non-fiction, genre fiction, literary fiction or even poetry, here are a few questions that you need to answer before you can move into the rest of the book promotion plan.

  • Is this book for men or women or both?
  • Is there a particular age group to which most potential readers are likely to belong?
  • Will people with certain habits or interests be more likely to buy it?
  • Do these readers in the group you’ve identified use the internet? Social media?
  • Is it likely that your potential readers live in a specific country? State or province? City?
  • Are they more likely to be urban or rural?

You begin to get the sense that you’re really painting a word picture of who these people are.  Once you know that it is much easier to reach out to them.

When I was considering the promotional plan for my memoir about being a ballet mom, I had to consider all of these questions.  The fact that it was published through the traditional route (submission-rejection-submission-acceptance etc.) didn’t change my responsibilities as an author.  In the twenty-first century world of publishing, authors are responsible for the lion’s share of the book promotion work whether their books are published by traditional publishers or they publish them on their own.  In Appendix 1 where I’ve shared the complete framework for the promotional plan, you’ll see that I’ve broken down the potential readers into a number of groups, all of whom have different perspectives.  Each of these groups uses different routes through which a message about a new book can be communicated. And this leads us to the next step of the promotional planning process.

Your objectives and messages

Obviously, you want potential readers to buy and read your book.  Clearly this is your primary objective.  But is this all?  Do you want them to view you as an expert in your field?  Do you want them to see you as a writer whose work will propel them to buy more of your books?  Do you want them to engage with you on your blog?  On Twitter? Are you using this book to establish your credentials as a springboard to career progression?

These might seem like questions you can simply take for granted.  They are not.  Your well-thought-out answers to them can help enormously in trying to figure out what to say to these potential readers and where to find them.

You may never have thought about this, but different messages will resonate with different readers.

What do you really want to say to potential book reviewers?  Do you want honest reviews (highly recommended), or do you want vanity reviews?  Those are reviews that you hope to get from fellow unknown writers with a view to giving equally glowing reviews to their books.  These are not reviews at all; rather they are advertisements.  We’ll discuss book reviews more thoroughly in another chapter.

What do you really want to say to potential readers?  The answer to this question will provide you with your book blurbs that will be part of the online description of your book and on its cover.  This is a very important consideration in marketing.  What you say in these blurbs and how they are written will either repel or attract readers.  For example, when I read an online description of a book on a site like Amazon, if the blurb is poorly written, I expect the book will be equally poorly written.  If it doesn’t accurately portray what the book is about, I might buy it and be severely disappointed resulting in me posting a bad review, or I might not buy it at all even though I might well enjoy it.

Sarah Juckes, writing on the Alliance of Independent Authors site suggests that writing your book’s blurb is the hardest part of the process because it requires you to condense  “…your novel into a few, short paragraphs in a way that makes your book impossible to overlook.”[i] She then goes on to suggest some steps you can take for writing a great blurb including doing research, finding the right style and voice, ensuring you start with a synopsis, and editing. (The difference between a synopsis and a blurb: the synopsis summarizes the entire book, whereas the blurb never provides a spoiler; rather it entices you to want to read more).

Accuracy, clarity and style all play a part in creating a compelling message for potential readers.

Targeting your readers

This is where many new writers fail to plan, resulting in significant wasted time and effort.  There is a tendency these days for new writers to spend an enormous amount of time on places like Twitter without giving much thought to whether or not that’s where their potential readers really are.  In the next few chapters, we’ll examine these places in more depth.  At this point, however, it’s important that writers understand that they might be wasting their time.

If, for example, your non-fiction book is designed for older adults, you’ll need to do some research to determine their use of the various media.  You might find that your target readers rarely look to social media for book recommendations.  Your genre fiction, on the other hand, might resonate well with specific groups on Facebook or Twitter.  Or perhaps your readers usually buy their books at conventions or meetings.

The Guardian book blog published a great list of top book-recommendation sites on the web[ii]  Reviewing this would help you to see where your readers go to find new books, and if you do some research on each of these sites, you’ll quickly determine which sites would be useful for you and how to go about getting your book featured there.

How successful was your plan?

Figuring this out depends on what you intended to accomplish from the outset.  But it is worth doing a check once in a while to see how effective the elements of your plan were.

If you simply consider your objective to be a numbers game, that will be your yardstick.  If, however, you want to build a reputation, a brand or a loyal following, your evaluation efforts will be more nuanced and longer-term. Whatever parameters you select to measure your success, remember that you’ll have to check in on how you’re doing from time to time to tweak your plan.  As you move forward in promoting your book, you’ll find that some approaches will work better than others and you’ll want to make changes along the way.

The next few chapters will provide you with a discussion of exactly what kind of tactics you might include in your book marketing plan. Whatever you include, there is one element that cannot be stressed enough:  start planning early.  Book marketing planning should begin long before you actually release your book.  In fact some of the tactics we’ll discuss in the next few chapters need to be executed before publication, while others simply need to be planned for implementation after that magic date.

[i] Sarah Juckes. October 4, 2013. How to write an effective blurb for a self-published book. http://www.selfpublishingadvice.org/how-to-write-an-effective-blurb-for-a-self-published-book/

[ii] Top book-recommendation platforms: What are your favourites? http://www.theguardian.com/books/booksblog/2014/may/10/top-book-recommendation-platforms-what-are-your-favourites

Posted in Book promotion, Social Media

When book promotion gets annoying

tweet loudlyIt was many years ago. My husband was on a television show that was, at that time, Canada’s answer to Oprah in the days when Oprah was still that kind of daytime talk show where the on-stage panel was deliberately provocative and the audience was stacked with people representing the points of view that were most likely to cause controversy. I know because I was sitting in that studio audience. The topic was sex with your doctor. Couldn’t get much more provocative, could it?

My husband, then chairing the Ethics Committee of the Canadian Medical Association, was representing the medical profession;  one of the other panelists, a patient who had evidently had a long-term, in-office liaison with her family doctor, was in disguise (because that’s the way these TV shows rolled in those days); the third member was a psychiatrist from California. He had written a book. He wasn’t going to let anyone forget it.  No sir.  If we heard the title once, we heard it practically every time he exhaled.  It was a fundamental lesson in book promotion for us self-effacing Canadians, and one that we would often laugh about in the intervening years when we co-authored four consumer health books.  That lesson was so basic and so fundamental and so necessary for authors to understand. 

Your potential readers cannot read a book that they do not know about and cannot find.

It’s that simple, but as we fast-forward to 2015 and beyond, it becomes clear that this simple, fundamental truth about book promotion is no longer so simple in its execution.  Back when we first learned it, there were few ways to get the name of your book in front of potential readers.  Being on television was a coveted one.  That’s why good publicists were so important.

The first time I was taken on a book tour across Canada, I was thrilled.  I was picked up at the airports by publicists and driven to interviews: television talk shows, radio station interviews and call-in shows, press interviews.  It was such fun, but to tell you the truth, had only limited success in reaching the right audience. [You can read about it at The fun of an author tour]  Those were the days when I was still writing those consumer health books, and was considered something of an expert.  This is still an important entrée into media coverage even today, but things are a lot more complicated.  As a result, I’ve come to observe that there is perhaps a line over which authors can cross when book promotion is nothing short of annoying to those of us on the receiving end.  I mean, how many times can you be bombarded by tweets and posts that scream, “Buy my book!” before you get so annoyed you click ‘unfollow.’  And are these authors really doing themselves any favors?  I think not, but I know who is benefiting: all of those thousands of sites and companies who will sell you their services to tweet your book all over the place.

I am often followed on Twitter by book tweeting services who, I guess, expect me to follow them back.  I always look at profiles before I do that and if a new follower is following 25,000 accounts, I NEVER follow back.  No one monitoring that feed would ever see a single one of my puny little tweets in the first place.  In the second place, I will then be bombarded by those thousands of automated tweets they put out every minute of every day shouting at me to buy books.  And in the third place, and this is the kicker, they will then stop following me anyway. What they really want is for me to follow them.  Without thousands of followers, they nave nothing to sell to those authors desperate for book tweets. follow me

Ever wonder where your followers go?  Well, you may find that if you don’t follow back, you’ll be dropped. Those new followers are more interested in their new followers than in what you have to offer on Twitter.What they really want is for us to follow them.  Without thousands of followers, they nave nothing to sell to those authors desperate for book tweets.

So, now I come to the end of my rant and bring myself back on topic and to that fundamental truth that has not changed.  Your potential new readers will never become real readers if they can’t find your book.  I just hope that we all recognize that there does come a time when enough is enough.  Just as that psychiatrist plugged his book at every available opportunity on television: after a while it was just annoying.